![]() missing commas in dialogue tags and misspellings, but the chapter would just switch perpsectives without a break, and I mean characters that were in completely different places. ![]() ![]() There were not only the little errors e.g. I almost shelved it a few times before, but things kept happening to hold my interest for a little longer, but I have to be honest: the novel direly needs a good editor. Initially, I was intrigued if saddened by the turn of events, but still interested even though where the plot was going was blatantly clear. The novel promised to expand upon the story and show what happened after the making was done and the original Maker disappeared into glitter. ![]() I had such high hopes for this after watching the charming (if a little creepy) short film (thank you By Hook or By Book for featuring this on your Whimsical Wednesday post!). Title: The Magnum Opus: Seek and You Shall Find Kiernan (Tinfoil Dossier) – $3.99 Amazon Kindle ![]()
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